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October 19, 2012
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The challenging puzzle
Of lies and deceit
When all is confused
And nothing needs to be

The complexity
Of an incoming situation
Where between the lines
Stays a trick of the mind

An illusion
Of inaccurate assessment
An overwhelming error
That is fraught with terror

As we attempt
To monitor the world
Through values and faults
Erroneous by default

All because what we are
And what we do
Although systematic
Is nothing but problematic
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Well, this is a little lame, but I want to know what you think! Hope y'all enjoy :)
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~Roos-Skywalker Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It was this part: ~As we attempt
To monitor the world
Through values and faults
Erroneous by default

All because what we are
And what we do
Although systematic
Is nothing but problematic~

Where I was like; ow! This is the subject! Now I get it.
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=robostorm Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm a little confused. Is that a positive or a negative?

ps. I probably should have included in my description that I was totally inspired by a combination of Person of Interest where a machine monitors the entire US and can predict acts of terrorism as well as all other crimes and 1984 with big brother always watching everyone.
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~Roos-Skywalker Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Neutral. For poems introductions are not always necessary. ;-)
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=robostorm Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
oops, sorry, I had actually spell checked it but I forgot to resave it.
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