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This is it
and it is time
for me to wake up
and bring myself back
from the edge

I feel myself
keeping calm
and continuing forward
with nowhere to look
but straight
into the eyes of hell

I'm waking up
emerging from the earth
that had covered me
for far too long
I'm on fire
with a liquid soul

It is time
to stake my claim
This is it
my final chance
to prove myself

I suppose
this is your final chance
to voice your opinion
not that I'm going to listen
This is my revolution
my rebellion
feel free to subscribe
but don't expect me to care

So as I rise up
and reclaim my birth right
my right to freedom
I realize
With the dawn of my
first breath
that this is it
so welcome to the end

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Well, this is my poem, really about me picking myself up, dusting myself off and taking back my life and fighting back. Really about me refusing to back down, refusing to be walked on and refusing to be ignored. Enjoy and comment.

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:iconaxalendra:
~axalendra Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
very powerful
are you dong well?
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:iconrobostorm:
=robostorm Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you. I'm glad that you think so! You should check out my newer pieces too!


I am doing quite well, studying for my exam tomorrow, yourself?
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:iconaxalendra:
~axalendra Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm fine ans will do
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:iconrobostorm:
=robostorm Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
that's good! (the first I mean)
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:iconalbinowolftwin:
*Albinowolftwin Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing, love.
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:iconrobostorm:
=robostorm Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much for the :+fav:
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:iconalbinowolftwin:
*Albinowolftwin Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome, love.
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:icondeerydeerth:
~DeeryDeerth Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really awesome! As great as any of your works! Keep up the great work! :D
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:iconrobostorm:
=robostorm Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much! I shall!
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:icondeerydeerth:
~DeeryDeerth Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great. :D
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