Hi all, it has been a while since I've posted anything (over a week is long for me). At any rate, I'm not gonna lie to you guys. This one seems rough to me. I haven't edited (or spellchecked for that matter) but I shall do that later on today. This is telling the story of a bridesmaid at her sister's wedding. I was thinking about the phrase 'always a bridesmaid, never a bride' and wanted to write a story of a bridesmaid who was once a bride. Then I complicated it with exploring all emotions experienced by the bridesmaid if she is at her sister's wedding, the sister who was marrying her ex-husband (who perhaps had been fooling around with her sister while they were still married)... and so, the plot thickened.
I was also trying to write in second person (something I haven't done in what seems like aeons). So this was sort of written from the outside looking in perspective of... maybe a sympathetic family member who attended the wedding.