I've been driving down this road too long,
Trying to find my way.
I never wanted to be this far gone.
But you have nothing to say.
I've travelled all around the world,
Just trying to get home.
I've been everywhere I never wanted to go,
Where I'll never find you.
I've sent you postcards from every city,
Trying to show you that I still care,
But they were all returned to sender.
I guess that you weren't there.
I don't know what else I expected,
I'm always behind the wheel.
We knew it would be tricky,
But I guess I was hoping still.
You finally sent me a letter,
Saying you couldn't wait,
You had always deserved better,
And you needed someone who could hold you at night.
You couldn't have known then,
But I was tired of waiting too,
I had my truck in gear,
And was finally coming home.
I had decided I would drive it,
All through the night.
I wouldn't stop,
Until I held you in my arms real tight.
So I gunned it down the I-90,
From Butte to Madison.
I can't stop you from leaving,
But I might be able to convince you to stay.
I've been driving down this road too long,
Trying to find my way.
I'm finally home, standing on the lawn,
But you have nothing to say.
And what you described - I don't think I find regret where I should. It isn't in the choice, is it? It's in something that happened before the poem, isn't it? At least that's what I feel; if I made this choice, I'd have no regrets. Provided that I understood the poem.
reminds me of easy rider for some reason... or some sixties b-movie... I don't know... its good.
And I really like your poem... however, I've read one before this which you definitely must read. Honestly...
Its in Poetry-watchers... Its called "The Crossroads" by ~DannyMechanist. Its a lovely poem - brief, and very concise in its imagery.